Cyclone

Cyclone

L.I. - Identify literary device - Simile

Identify some of the similes in the poem

-  As hard as strone.

- Like a washing machine.

- Like an evil demon.

- Like being chased by a lion.

What is the poet describing with these words?

crashing – Lighting destroying people with it’s fire.

whistling – Iron garage roofs blowing off.

clicking – stones clicking aga the window.

Word Cline- Tall

Today in class we did word cline the word toady was tall and I put little one first then I scream shot it all.

Blogging

Today I wrote on 3 blog's. One of them was Dezy. I like Dezy's blog because her books were so cool. I like her star friends one because it has lots of animals.

Gymnastic

Today in class I took a scream shot of my Gymnastics. I came 2 place.

The glass House- 5-7-10

The Glass House

Photo courtesy of Tom Frunin, One Big Photo

Once there was a glass house under a bridge standing there. It was so pretty with so much colours on the glass house. There was a city behind the glass house. The glass house looked like a shop because it had lots of food in the glass house. After the glass house was made out of a shop but, it had no door.

After that Sara looked at the door but, at the door she saw her mum. Sara mum
looked old and then Sara mum said go away. Then Sara got her mum back and then
lived happily ever after.

Sentence types

Finding their way

Simple - The position of the sun appears to change from east to west.

Compound- Animals don’t have maps or GPS systems.

Complex-  Bees can find their way back to their hive, after flying long distances
looking for food.  

Today in class we did some reading. The first book we read was finding their way.
So we had to find a AAAWWUBBIS in the book.

THE READING ROOM

THE READING ROOM

• The title refers to  the bathroom.

• Italic is in the book Lisa is reading and standard is Lisa in the book
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• Mum finished on the telephone.
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• His feet feel like it was ice.
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• Lisa did not want to be found becuase she loved her book very much.
• Lisa’s older sister looked for her everywhere. 
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• Then the mum finished on the telephone.
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• Lisa mum looked everywhere for Lisa becuase she was in the bathroom forevery.
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• Mark is a boy who is in Lisa’s reading book.
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• Lisa did not want to come out becuase she didn’t want to do work that her mum tells her to do.
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• Kathy is going to go to the libray to get some book for Lisa. 
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• Lisa is reading a really fun book. Lisa had good time becuase she is reading her book in the
• bathroom. Lisa thinks that Mark will come alive becuase Mark is in the book. Lisa got the book
• from the libray. 

The Surprised Mouse

courtesy of Valery Subachev, One Big Photo.

Once there was a mouse in it’s hole. The mouse was just coming out of the hole and wanted
to see where a loud noise was coming from. The mouse saw lots of peanuts on the ground
and went up to eat them. The mouse was so surprised that he saw lots and lots of peanuts. Then
the mouse went to lie on the peanuts and ate some of them. The mouse took the rest of the
peanuts back to his hole and put the peanuts on his bed. The mouse had nowhere to sleep.

There were so many peanuts that the mouse had to dig in another hole just for the peanuts. The
mouse was so tried, he put all the peanuts in the new food hole. Then the mouse went back to
sleep. The mouse lived happily ever after with all his peanuts.

5-7-10- Life On Mars

http://www.pobble365.com/life-on-mars/

A long time ago there was an astronaut coming out of the door and it was dark inside and the man
is wearing his space suit. He was looking everywhere to find out what's going on.
The man went inside and it was very dark and dusty. So dark and dusty that he couldn’t see
because the wind blew the dust and he felt scared. Then he saw something move!
He jumped up and ran away when he came back and looked it was a little bug. 

He got out his water bottle and he started drinking.
Then he saw a gold coin and it was so shiny he picked it up and put it in his bag.
Then he saw a window high above his head. Then he climbed out the window and went to his rocket.
He blast off and went back to Earth. 

5-7-10 Battle Of The Storm

BATTLE

Photo courtesy of Lewis Moorhead, www.flewdesigns.com

Once there was a war it had shouting and there were lots of people staying on
the spot with their guns.

They had a battle up in the sky and they started shooting.
There was a crash and a machine was on fire.
It was on the ground sitting there.
There was lots of shooting and fighting and the buildings were on fire.

That is a lot of mess in that war.
The ground looks like it is such a mess and it looks like that place is frozen.
I think it is a freeze gun to freeze the people.

The Zoo Trip

Auckland Zoo Recount

When we arrived at the zoo, we went to see the red pandas and then

I saw two on top of the tree and they were sleeping in the tree
I said it was cute I and Fala and then we went to Australia we saw some meerkats
It was trying to come on my hand but it didn't.

Next we went with Hohepa first we saw two cheetah and one was on the ground and it was sleeping.
One was in the sun rexl and the cheetah can run fast we went to see the baboons and I could not see it
but miss mae show me. Then I saw it and then it stand up and then it had a pink bum. 

Then we went to see the zoo Keeper opened Burma mouth and everyone said ohhhh and then we saw
the flamingos. They were making lots of sound and then we went to the steps and  we had our lunch.

We saw some ostrich, and some zebra, and some giraffe the zebra were eating hay.
The giraffe were eating the trees and then the ostrich were at the gate all together.

Finally we went to the playground and then we put our bags on the chair.

First I try the little one but it was not that fun. I try the big side and it was fun 
I side down on my stomach and it was cool and then I try it again and again.
Miss kirkpatrick said go to your adult and then I said everyone side down but everyone was still
standing there. 

At The Sea Side

         Today our poem was at the sea side. We had to draw a picture of our self at the beach.   

The Zoo Trip

Auckland Zoo Recount

When we arrived at the zoo, we went to see the red pandas and then I saw two on top of the tree and they were sleeping in the tree. I said it was cute I and Fala and then we went to Australia we saw some meerkats. It was trying to come on my hand but it didn't.

Next we went with Hohepa first we saw two cheetah and one was on the ground and it was sleeping. One was in the sun rexl and the cheetah can run fast we went to see the baboons and I could not see it but miss mae show me. Then I saw it and then it stand up and then it had a pink bum. 

Then we went to see the zoo Keeper opened Burma mouth and everyone said ohhhh and then we saw the flamingos. They were making lots of sound and then we went to the steps and  we had our lunch.

We saw some ostrich, and some zebra, and some giraffe the zebra were eating hay.The giraffe were eating the trees and then the ostrich were at the gate all together.

Finally we went to the playground and then we put our bags on the chair. First I try the little one but it was not that fun. I try the big side and it was fun  I side down on my stomach and it was cool and then I try it again and again. Miss kirkpatrick said go to your adult and then I said everyone side down but everyone was still standing there. 

Dwarf Planet

Pluto

Pluto was thought to be heavily cratered from billion of years of
impaets.The average surface temperature for Pluto is around
40 kelvin. The side of Pluto facing Charon looks different than
the opposite side. We know there are at least five moon of Pluto.
It has an extreme elliptical orbit. Until the fly by of NASA’s New
Horizons spacecraft in 2015 little was known about
Pluto. I think Pluto is interesting because it is far away from the
other planets.

Dwarf Planet

Pluto

https://starchild.gsfc.nasa.gov/docs/StarChild/StarChild.html

Pluto was once a planet, but now it is a dwarf planet.
Pluto has lots of craters from being hit by asteroids.The
average surface temperature for Pluto is around 313.15 degrees.
The side of Pluto facing Charon looks different than the opposite side.
We know there are at least five moons of Pluto. It was
known that it had one large moon is named Charon.

Tuku

Rickety Trickety Train

I’m sat in my seat

With a sandwich to eat

As I travel the trickety track.

It’s an ever so rickety trickety train,

And I honestly thinkety think

That before it arrives

At the end of the line

It will tip up my drippety drink.

ComplexSetene

Complex sentences

Simple-

The two teams will play soccer games against each other at lunchtime.

Complex-

The two teams will play soccer games against each other at lunchtime, because his team wanted to play.

then or Than

My room is nicer then my sister.

I had six pizza then I went home.

My mum went to the shop then my mum said good job Tuku.

I was cleaning the window and then we went to the shop.

My dog was hungry then we went to the dog shops.

My candy was yummy than fish in chips.

My plant was wetter than the nice plant.

The bridge is older than the nice one.

My sister desk is nicer than my one.

I was better  than my dad.

Compound sentence

Compound Sentence

Today I made my mum some weet bix, and then I made myself some weet bix.

For writing today we wrote compound sentences about our morning. We had to highlight the subject, verb and conjunction. The punctuation is yellow.